literature

Once

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Literature Text

I met Death, once.
And he was welcoming.

I smelled the blood
as it escaped from my body; as it ran from my wounds.

I tasted the salty tears
of which he kindly wiped from my face.

I felt his bony hands;
and they were like daggers that pierced my skin.

I watched as his dark cloak
engulfed me into a black nothingness.

In my suffering, I waited,
waited for his unforgiving clutch upon my soul.

I heard his rattling breath
as I drew my last.

I met Death, once.
And I welcomed him with open arms.
Oh hey look
I'm not dead

Oh and bonus points
A poem!

Just an idea. I don't particularly like it at the moment, but I definitely have some ideas to improve it at a later date.

Constructive criticism appreciated C:

Thanks,
Hawkie

Writing and idea/s (c) me [Hawkfeather-WaveClan]
© 2014 - 2024 Hawkieface
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incurser's avatar
Nice. Dark, but nice